山东省学位英语英文写作问题

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这类直译问题造成语句生硬、用词罗嗦，或者不符合英文表达习惯。

一、在中国，一些教育机构打着颠覆传统教育的标语从事线上教育不好: In China, some education enterprises conducted onlineeducation with a slogan of overturning traditional education.
较好: In China, someeducation enterprises described their work asoverturning traditional education and conducted online education.

二、相比于设备甲，我更相信设备乙

不好: Ibelieve device A more than device
B.较好: Ibelieve device A would be more effective than device B.

三、随着时光流逝，这些企业从市场上消失了不好: These enterprises faded away from the market as time went by.
较好: Overtime,these enterprises faded awayfrom the market.

四、从中国教育部的统计资料可以看出，截止到2016年，中小学网络覆盖率达到87%。不好： Wehave seen statistics from the Ministry ofEducation ofChinashowing that the lnternet access rate ofelementary and high schools inChina had reached 87% by 2016.
较好: Statisticsfrom the Ministry ofEducation ofChinahave shov that, by 2016, the lnternet access rate ofelementary and high schoc:s inChina had reached 87%.

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